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Thursday, April 23, 2020

Manu tukutuku

This is my poem about Manu tukutuku that I did this week. I learnt how to make a cinquain poem.
I also learnt what a noun is and more about Adjectives. I enjoyed learning and writing new words
like mesmerising.I am still wondering about different designs for Manu tukutuku.


2 comments:

  1. Theo this is a very thoughtful and expressive poem! We must need to do some more poetry! I love the word mesmerising... it is a very descriptive image and I find kites mesmerising too! I like your personal voice in line 4 too! Tino Pai rawa atu, Theo! P.S. I will fix up the formatting for you.

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  2. Wow Theo,
    I love your cinquain poem, it takes a lot of thinking to come up with appropriate adjectives, you have done a great job Theo.

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